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-Who is this girl staring at me?
-Her eyes are painted blacker than the darkest night's sky
-Her long black hair falls gently over her face, hiding her eyes
-She looks sad..
-Her make-up smears as silent tears fall from her eyes and down her pale cheeks
-Why is she so sad?
-Her white gown is stained of a deep crimson
-Perhaps she is hurt.. Should I help? How?
-She is afraid.. What are you afraid of little girl?
-Why are you hiding behind this cold wall of glass?
-Take my hand, you're so close, yet I can't reach you..
-A small pool of red liquid is forming around her feet now..
-I really think we should help her
-Please, little girl, take my hand, know that you're not alone! I want to help you..
-She has a dark look in her eyes now... it's as if she is staring right into my soul..
-I feel a shot of ice cold sadness run through my body
-Why are you staring at me so? I don't understand..
-It's getting so dark and cold.. my body feels numb..
-I wan't to move, but I cant
-Please don't leave me alone in the dark.. I dont like being alone..
-Her face is so pale.. and her stare so distant..
-She's not staring at me.. she's staring through me..
-All I see is red now, it's all around me
-I try to blink it all away, but my eyes can't seem to move from hers..
-Why are you doing this?!
-Then I realize.. the girl in the mirror is me.. I'm doing this..
-What have I done?
-I'm not ready to die, I haven't lived my life..
-I'm just a kid, please dont take me yet
-Just one more chance, thats all I ask..
-One more chance to tell my mom I love her, one more chance to tell *him* how I feel..
-They need to know.. Please! Everything is getting so dark..
-What have I done?
-I'm sorry mommy, dad, everyone...
-I don't know how I could have been so selfish..
-I love you all, and I'm so, so sorry..
:iconangelfallenfromgrace:

Author's Comments

I sat down with a pen and my notebook, and just started to move my hand.. this is what came out of it..

the picture is in fact of my eye..

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:iconblooming:
beautiful, that one of the words that i can use for this, it's just so, great poem!

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Well she was my catatonic sex toy, love-joy diver
She went down down down there into the sea
Yeah she went down down down there, down there for me right on!
:iconangelfallenfromgrace:
Thank you, I appreciate the compliment

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I was hoping I could tell you this with two feet on the ground
But I don't think I can talk, because I'm not very stable right now...
:icongorrelgat:
This is very good. One problem though. If I wrote this, I wouldn't have given the point away in the title. It would have had much more impact if the title didn't indicate that you are staring at yourself in the mirror. Otherwise, I like it.
:iconangelfallenfromgrace:
You raise a point.. I appreciate your criticism.. thank you

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I was hoping I could tell you this with two feet on the ground
But I don't think I can talk, because I'm not very stable right now...
:icondoffa:
Wow, very deep. It's quite a real feeling piece, I can see why the picture matches up so well with the writing. I really like this piece, I think I'll add it to my favourites!

~Doffa

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Ours is not to question, but who is to question us?

-Doffa
:iconangelfallenfromgrace:
Ahhh.. thank you! haha I feel special being added to the "favorites list" :D

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I was hoping I could tell you this with two feet on the ground
But I don't think I can talk, because I'm not very stable right now...
:icondoffa:
Thats quite alright, only a few pieces get into my favourite list it has to be something unique and close to the artist.
Keep up the good work!

~Doffa

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Ours is not to question, but who is to question us?

-Doffa

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